Oh em gee! *_* Your words are just incredible! Everything was so great, woven beautifully and energetically. I just fell in love with that last stanza:
"The cause of
the happening
is the reason
for every
single
thing."
I think I might make that my Facebook status one of these days! Excellent job!
Your last line reminds me of something Taylor Swift would put out to the media. Everything doesn't happen for a reason. Try telling my idiot evangelist relatives that. The more some people try to find a reason for a pointless cause, the more they choke themselves. Idiots don't get dummy. Great content!
Oh em gee! *_* Your words are just incredible! Everything was so great, woven beautifully and energetically. I just fell in love with that last stanza:
"The cause of
the happening
is the reason
for every
single
thing."
I think I might make that my Facebook status one of these days! Excellent job!
Loved the word play. The various juxtapositions and they all work together to give it a whole new meaning every time! A clever poem!~
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thanks again, Divya. This one is different from my usual "concrete image" style. Every once in a whi.. read moreThanks again, Divya. This one is different from my usual "concrete image" style. Every once in a while, I like to play with a "language" poem. Glad you enjoyed it.
12 Years Ago
you are welcome. Your poems are very effective in conveying a vivid picture!