Depression

Down, down, down I fall

Eternity taking its toll on my soul

Pressing deep into my unhealing wounds

Reawakening the pain of every last soul that I've come to lose

Everyone slips away

Slowly,

Slipping away,

I fall into depression

On my hill of fate

Never to roam this world again

Reviews

[Moon]

Nice description of how bad depression hurts. I really like this piece. You have put a lot of emotion into it.

[Serena]

Thanks. This was during one of my depressed moments

[Moon]

Your are welcome

[anxia]

Wonderful Is all i can say!!! I love the first and second lines particularly.Thanks for sharing.

[Serena]

your welcome. :) I'm happy you liked the poem