Enternity

My friend is dying and this is written for him. People should read this though so those that feel a loss or are suicidal can see that people care for you. (For thos in the future, my friend is ok now)

The wind dies
As does my heart

 

My feelings go
As does the will to live

 

The voices drag me down
And I feel nothing
As the light in the world fades

 

Slowly I drift to an endless slumber
Letting the darkness fade over me
And I slowly become a shadow

 

The shell of my body stays
Yet my soul leaves

Leaving me to the shadows
For all enternity

Author's Note

This is my feelings put into a poem, and again was written for my friend
(please tell if any spelling is need to be fixed)

Reviews

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is very emotional write, and you expressed your heavy feelings very well.
Spellings are alright, you don't have to think about it cause it's not rhyming anyway. Yeah, that really sucks, i lost my both grandpas and my older friend Ella has a breast cancer, so at least i can sympathize with you. I'm sorry for your friend. But you don't have to be so dark in your life, he'll always stay in your memory, you don't have to forget him if he dies, just think like he would be happy if you are. Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D

[Whiskurz]

This is a well written sad tribute to your friend......Whisk