Poem River

Ever flowing....

Well sprung deep,
Of Earthy sleep,
An ancient dream,
A stream.

 

Brook babbling foams,
Smoothes cobbled stones,
White washed clean,
A stream.

 

Through leafy shade,
Gentle cascade,
Through shadows gleam,
A stream.

 

And waters meet,
Quick hearts beat,
The poem is,
A stream.

 

Reviews

[Destiny]

I love the imagery in this poem. I could hear the "Brook babbling". It's very tranquil. I enjoyed reading this.
♥Destiny♥

[Sierra,love]

you paint a vivid picture

i love your writing

nicely done
:]

[Jane Doe]

I loved this piece! I agree, excellent use of simile. You did a great job with this one!

[J. James Reider]

Excellent usage of a simile! It paints a very realistic picture of a place that can carry your mind away.... Put your mind and soul at ease.... Not too much else to say, you said it all with your words!