Piranha

 

Hittin I20 from L.A. to Tijuana

We just smoked some fool like some bomb a*s Marijuana

I got a girl that's as freaky as Madonna

that tears me up like a school of Piranha

 

A mind full of thoughts is a mind full of java

poetry starts to flow out of my mouth like hot lava

I may be broke for now but I'll be coming up manana

I'll attack the pigs like a school of Piranha

 

I'm the most vicious of all the damn fishes

I'm a Piranha on a mission doing my own damn fishin'

I got the opposition listed in critical condition

Now you're sweating like you're in a sauna,

Cuz you're Surrounded by Piranha...

 

I honked every Hoe from here to Tijuana

Then I chill with my homies and burn the Marijuana

I got a girl that is freakier than Madonna

That tears me up like a school of Piranha

 

I turned her out and she was a real rump shaker

Mess with this Piranha and prepare to meet your maker

When I get down, when I get down like I wanna.....

I get down like a school of Piranha........

 

I'm a Piranha.....Piranha.

Reviews

[Muse]

ugh...like the reader below...wanted to hate this too. It got under my skin...maybe it was the need to rap it in my mind. A song of Tijuana. What a dirty dirty piranha. Now I have this annoying eighties song in my head...familiar beat...but the words are all yours...it's just wrong. lol

[Lola Nation]

MC Under rated...

[Adam Greenfield]

I want to not like it but, well, I do. Definitely not my style of read or write but there's something to this that shakes me. Maybe it's the grittiness of it or that fact that I'm between you and Tijuana so I know the feeling being expressed. Definitely a simple, moving piece. And Angelhead Hipster has it right... definitely a slam piece.

[Angelheaded Hipster]

Fishy....you have a slam piece on your hand, and Id much rather hear this spoken than just having my own cadence in my skull. I like this though, it is a bit angry, amusing, and its your voice.

[Ice QueenJen]

pretty good, could be made into a rap or song!

[Michael X]

ha ha... like a school of flesh eating fish. this is cheezy and brilliant
100 for being a fun read

[Ed Hart]

This is what I call foot stompin' poetry...and, I know that ride very well...