You Are...

You Are...

A Poem by Mia Rockwell

You are the Joker.
Dysfunctional. Illogical.
Throw me upon the stage and make me dance your little dance while I'm stuck in the trance of your imaginary romance.

You are the Nightmare.
The scream of every childs bad dream.
The never ending scare that leaves their faces pale and bare

You are the Villian.
No hesitation in your plan of pain to drain the happiness from my every pore until I'm lying on the floor screaming, "No more!!...no more..."

© 2014 Mia Rockwell


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Your words and rhythm have a song-like quality to them. The way you write is so moving. Great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I must admit it. You my lady is giving me goosebumbs all over the place. I am biting my lips in an excited way. The joker and the thief. Definetly one of the better tonight.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I like the non typical flow. Great comparisons.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reminds me a lot of a poem that my husband's ex wrote about him. She compared him to The Joker, but it wasn't a very truthful piece. But yours is a lot better than it, to me. I like this a lot. Well done. Keep up the good work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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