Still

I wrote this poem when I was a child:-)

Still
I can’t live without you.
You think so, too.
I am lonely now.
So give me your heart and take my love.
Never! Never! Never
Make promises forever.
But now it’s time
To cry
True.
All days and nights for me and you.
In the still of the nights
Or in the nights of the still
We believe,
Still believe.

Author's Note

What do you think of my composition?:-)