Lost Everything over a boy.

 Smile,

Cause that's all you have left,

Happiness,

Gone forever,

Taken from your hands,

Never coming back,

Never,

Ever,

Love taken away,

Just like a kidnapped child in a deserted field,

I failed,

Trying to get you back,

I gave up,

lost everything we made,

Love,

Trust,

Feelings,

Happiness,

Everything,

I guess now is the time to let you go.

Reviews

[Elijah Washington]

Very deep and sad, and very true. It happens to people everyday so many can relate. I love your use of one word lines to create emphasis and meaning and prove the point of losing it all. Very deep. Good job. Keep writing :]