creating a ripple

A Poem by Mike

creating a ripple

A conscious being,

living loving seeing,

learning creating dreaming,

falling triumphing believing,

erecting connecting reflecting,

........resurrecting.

Author's Note

i would love to hear any type of feed back thanks!!

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Again! I love the rhyme scheme and where it's going, I just wish it was longer! It's like a tease 6 bars.

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Added on April 24, 2014
Last Updated on May 3, 2014

I love going on walks especially with my dogs. I draw quite frequently, read, an attempt to write a little. more..