Merry-Go-Round

around the world I go.....

The world is tumbling
Its crumbling
As I'm falling down
As I drift in my space
I live in no place
The people moving around me
Make my head spin
Turning and turning
Like a merry-go-round
Just waiting for it all to stop

Reviews

[alyssa]

OMG!!!! i love it....it has sooomuch meaning....in such a little peom and i can realate to how you feel.. i feel that way somtimes to.... as if the word is spining so fast you can't keep up. love it great write and keep on writing!!!!!!!!
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[Hotel Mornings]

I love short poems. I think I love this so much because I feel the same way right now. I like your lack of punctuation (which is something that usually bugs me). It's actually used effectively in this poem. It matches the meaning and creates the perfect flow.

[Mysty Rayn]

Very truthful to so many. Well put, well written.