As an ocean full of dreams

An attempt at describing what can't be put into words.

As an ocean full of dreams,

Like the sky is so serene,

Shining like a winter’s day,

Feeling of the summer’s shade.

 

Sapphire diamonds glow with joy,

Pearls of ocean’s deep feelings,

Blessings of Angel’s rejoice,

Beautifully pure do they seem.

 

Dream catchers of man’s appeal,

Stare too long, you’ll get a thrill,

Thrills of life and love and hope,

Peace and beauty she’ll evoke.

 

Eyes that see or eyes that seem,

Magically as they shall be,

Her gaze will put you to sleep,

A journey down to the sea.

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy. I tried not to make it as confusing as most of my poems.

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is beautiful and you sir have a nice vocabulary indeed! :D It's also not confusing, which none of your poems are! Unless the reader either doesn't have their screen large enough for the words or running right through the poem without any care! Anywho, this is an excellent piece of yours. Great job XD


Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

[Michael Thrower]

Lol thank you again Ashley, I love your reviews :D

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome, and I'm glad that you do ;D

[Tori]

my face is red and im crying .....woah.....

[Toni Blackerby]

iv seen a few of your poems and i love them so keep it up

[Tatiana]

haha i know how u feel all my friends are like ahhh heehee yeah um good after they read mine.
really liked it , i love when i can read a poem n it takes me somewhere in my mind. :)

[Nath]

Beautiful! I love the wonderful imagery, it's like magic. You put a smile on my face, thank you for this brilliant poem!

[selkietales]

So beautiful I read it twice!

[Michael Thrower]

Haha thanks! :D

[mark slade]

Excellent!

[afra]

deep and beautiful ....good job

[Michael Thrower]

Tyvm Afra

[T. Logan]

I didn't think it was confusing at all! I really like this. I love the line 'sapphire diamonds glow with joy'

[Michael Thrower]

Why thank you very much :D

[Ellinyrrah]

The images this brought to mind. It's beautiful. My favorite stanza is "Dream catchers of man's appeal,..."

[Michael Thrower]

Thank you :) I was hoping it would really have some great imagery for anyone who can think with their eyes open ;)