Sexual Desires

Oh...

Tongues scraping at each other’s flesh

She bears down with mortal needs

More than that she craves?

Demonic inception’s plead.

 

Composed of sexual desires

She kisses flaming skin

His grasp hard on her hips

Incubus in thrall with sin

 

Her mortal attractions are no more

Sin is her only wish

A few minutes of delight

She feeds a simple kiss

 

Soul drains out like sand

Unraveling in his bliss

Her heart is gone again

No redemption, it’s his.

 

Blinded and chained she moans away

All her dirty thoughts

An endless stream of content

As her body rots.

 

 

Reviews

[That_Girl]

So, let me get this straight.

1. Michael complains about the "old-lady-s****y-so-called-smut-I-never-want-to-read-again-Avy-should-come-back" BS.

2. Michael writes a pretty damn decent "dark erotic" poem.

3. Michael DOESN'T tell his friend, Avy (me, in case you forgot).

YOU HAVE ACCESS TO MY BLEEPING PHONE AND YOU DON'T MENTION THIS?!?!?! Wow. Just wow.

[Michael Thrower]

I was actually writing this to mock the old lady s****y smut or w/e, lol xD But I did forget to tell you... I'M SORRY! D:

[Michael Thrower]

My authors note used to be "F**k you". But I thought that was too mean.

[That_Girl]

Yeah well, f**k you too. OMFG GO LOOK AT YOUR GODDAMN KIK I'M OUT OF MY MIND NERVOUS!

[Michael Thrower]

ilyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

[That_Girl]

Love you too, babe. :*

[Michael Thrower]

AVY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Bella]

God I loved this... Brilliant! Good work! And I love the way that it is so realistic. It's the truth.

[Michael Thrower]

Haha thanks! I haven't seen you around in forever

[Bella]

Yea had a little trip back to rehab, but I'm out now so I'm back :)

[Michael Thrower]

Oh wow... How old are you now?

[Bella]

15 last month :)

[Michael Thrower]

Oh nice :D Happy late birthday

[Bella]

thank you! :) :)

[Death Girl]

Does she like die or something? anyway nice write.

[Michael Thrower]

Sure.

[Brave girl]

you choose just the right words,unlimited thoughts...well penned;all though i'm not sure about that author's note :/

[Michael Thrower]

lol

[Be myself!]

good job

[Michael Thrower]

No job.

[Be myself!]

Fine then. good write, is that better?

[Michael Thrower]

Yes. Thank you. ;p

[Be myself!]

Alrighty then. lol your welcome

[paperdaydreams]

omg i love this poem, the language used is interesting and it creates great imagery, really good write :)

[bryandc15]

F*** y** too. Good write.

[Michael Thrower]

Did you really have to * "You"? Lol xD

[bryandc15]

Lol. Yeah, you're right. Sorry I haven't noticed.

[Michael Thrower]

Lol it's all good xP

[eglantine]

Woah there author's note. You ok?

Second to last stanza, instead of using a comma in the last line I'd use a dash.

[Michael Thrower]

Lmao, yes. And I like that idea..

[unshakenScene]

this is good:)

[Michael Thrower]

ok

[Mary Christabel George]

I wish someday you write about men with addiction too. Hee hee hee... Well i specially liked the last line "As her body rots".

[Michael Thrower]

It wouldn't be worth it after writing this, other than changing all the "she" to "he". And this was a mock play on all the erotic poems etc that so many people are writing on here; it's so sickening. So I wrote this. Sort of a "Behind the picture" poem.