The Murders Of The Town Of Whittery

A family's friends kids get murdered and detective johntahn burns and detective Bernie Darwin Try to solve this horrific case piece by piece. (Might have some spelling errors I did the best I could)

The Murders Of The Town Of Whittery


The quietness in the town of witery is like that of none other. People don't say hello, people don't say goodbye. It is littelrly like a ghost town. The people of whittery are not that welcoming. They just stay in there house for te majority of the day. There is no smell of fresh air, there is only the smell of fear,pain, and gloomy whether. But the town of whittery has not always been like this. For the events that happened from May 17th- may 27th changed the history whittery, the smell of whittery, even the people of whittery. For this is the story of The murders of the town of Whittery . It was May 17th, 1978. It was just another normal day in the town of whittery. Then flowers blossoming, the people talking, the trees growing, the smell of fresh air (was the finest smell by the way it had a very undescribable fresh smell) people coming and going. Dogs barking. It was just a normal welcoming town. That is until that evening may 17th 1978. It was 6:00 and the berstein family (Jewish family by the way if your wondering) was just about to start dinner. Ms berstein was cooking and mr Bernstein was in his study doing his work. He was a doctor. And there kids were in the living room watching television. All of a sudden there was a big crash coming from the livin room. Mr Bernstein heard this and started running to the living room. "Honey what's wrong?" He says in a loud voice. Tears running down ms bersteins face and unable to speak she points to the tv. It's breaking news. The news reporter says. The murder victims family members did not want to give away there names. But they did give us a picture. Again here is the picture. Mr berstein drops his glasses on the floor. He looks at the television set with his wide open eyes and his gloomy sad but scared in yet confused face. The kids then start crying. The berstein family's friends which were the closet friends they had and they were like family to them. The family's kids picture popped up. Mr Bernstein runs to the telephone and spins the the numbers to dial there family friends number.(the bellinghams was the family's name by the way). No answer. Mr Bernstein try's again. No answer. So mr berstein and ms berstein jump in the car. And head to there house on the other side of town. They arrive a half an hour later. Mr berstein rings the doorbell and knocks on the door and says. Jennifer (that's the wife's family friends name) open up its Harold". The door slowly opens the creaking noise makes a high pitch sound. The maid is standing there crying. "Mr berstein what has happened?" She says as she wipes away the tears from her eyes. "Where are Mr and mrs Bellingham?" Mr berstein asks. "I think there at the police station." The maid says while again wiping tears from her eyes. "We're here call us if you need anything". Mr berstein as he waves goodbye to her. Mr and ms berstein arrive at the police station 10 minutes later. They barge into the police station. And see Jennifer and Ronald (that's te dads name). Mrs. Bellingham is crying and clinching her short but sharp finger nails into her husbands arm and her husband rubs her head he starts to cry. "Why did this happen. We are horrible parents. My baby's are gone." Mrs Bellingham says as she wipes tears from her eyes. Mr berstein asks what happend. " mr belligham then replies. "We were in the kitchen cooking dinner and the kids asked us to to to" mr Bellingham can't finish the sentence. He then says with tears in his eyes. "Then we said ok. But when we call you for dinner you must come. So we continued to cook dinner then from outside we heard- w. We we we we why we. Mr Bellingham breaks down again. And then says " we heard gunshots. So we ran outside. We called there name. Jacob Jacob and then he disnt answer. And then we come across them laying down flat on the floor. there they were my two little baby's my two little angels. My life right there Lying on the ground bleeding. We rushed to the hospital but it was to late. Who did this. Whoever did I will find him. I will kill him. Even if it's te last thing I ever do he will pay. HE WILL PAY" mr Bellingham screams. Slicence fills the room. Speachless mr berstein can't find the words to say every time he talks it's just tears instead. Mr berstein just hugs them and talks for about two hours. Mr and mrs berstein. Go home. Then they remember as they pull up they left there kids in the house watching tv. They run into the house. Scream there names no Answer. They can't find them. Mr berstein cries and cries then runs to the backyard. And sees them playing on the swings. Harold and mrs berstein run per to ten and give them a big hug look at them in the eye and mr berstein with tears in his eyes eye ls. "Do not ever leave us my babies. Promise to always stick by us. And never leave mommy and daddy's sight. Baby's promise. My angels." Mr berstein wipes the tears from his eyes. Then the Edward (that's the kids name) says "ok daddy. Daddy were is Sally and Robert?" Mr berstein says with tears in his eyes. "Um well babies they have to gone on a long caction and there not coming back for a long time." He says trying to hold back tears. "Ok daddy. Daddy I'm hungry" the kids say. "Let's go eat" they go sit down right before they start mr berstein yells "wait. We must say grace. We must thank the lord for this beautiful meal. We must thank him for keeping us safe. We must thank him but we mustn't ever take advantage him. Never never ever." They start eating and every has tears in there eyes. Of course everyone except there kids who doesn't know what's going on. The family eats an sleeps. Oh how they will have dream nightmares tonight and tommrow well tommrow is tommrow and we can deal with that when it comes. If it comes.

day 1
meanwhile detective bernie darwin is sitting at his desk. Just sitting there and tyhking. a knock sound comes from the door. "come in" bernie says. "sir we have just come across a murder and here all the files and we are giving this case to you because you are the best we got" the policemen says. "you will be working with your partner detective johnathan burns." the policemen says. detective burns comes through the door. short black hair, very handsome face, a smile thats undescriable. "hello detective darwin i am johntahn burns i will be helping you through this case." he sticks out his hand to shake darwins hand. they shakes. "nice to meet you detective" darwin says. they start reviewing the case." then start trying to figure out. "lets interview the bellingham family." darwin says. They get to the bellingham house and knock on the door. "derives city county police department open up we have a few questions for you regarding your children". the door opens up and mrs bellginham in tears says. "please…. come in" deceive darwin and burns come walk thourgh the door. they sit down on the couch and start the interview. darwin starts "hello mrs bellingham. so we are here to ask you a few questions about your children. did your family have any eniems anyone who could want to do this? any crazy people in your family?" "not to my knowledge". mrs bellingham says again with tears in her eyes. "can you show us were this terrible incident happened". burns says. Mrs bellingham then takes them two the backyard exactly were they found them. "there it is detectives. there is were my babies took there last breath, there last step, there last vision, there last sound." mrs bellingham breaks down and cries again and runs in the house. they look around and can't seem to find anything. " nothing godamit" darwin and burns say. the smell of death fills the air. and then they leave the house and drive off back to the police station. "how are we gonna catch this guy" burns says. "i don't know but i do know i won't rest till this man is found" darwin says. " its gonna be a long night" burns says. "a very long night" darwin chips in. they drive there car and arrive at the police station and sit down at there disks and begin looking into the case that will change evrybodys life. they started looking into the magic murder case has begun. but the question is when? When!? will it end. thats a question we don't know yet. we may never know. but keep this in mind. 'one man can cause an big event and one event can cause the whole world to change and when the whole world changes. thats when we know… They won.

day 2

The hits the town of wintery in a haunting beautiful yet scary and gloomy way. Beep beep of the alarm clock goes off. ring ring detective darwins telephone rings. "hello" darwin says in a sleepy voice. "sir we found something on the body its not much but its something". the coroner says. "ill be right over" darwin says. Darwin arrives at the lab. He walk in but detective burns is already there waiting for him. "good morning detective" burs says. "good morning" he replies back. The two detectives walk into the coroners room.. And they found a piece of glove that must have been cut off. They the piece to the lab and research it. "its a black leather small mens gloves " darwin says. "Its impossible millions of people buy gloves it would be impossible to track down who the killer is" burns says. "your right" darwin replies. "Its getting late. lets go home" burns says. "ok" darwin replies.
We have come to a metaphorical stop sign in the story. they don't know what to do. The detectives are stuck. But rememberer this. " No one is perfect, not one man, not one killer, not one monster, no one is perfect. everyone has to make a mistake…. eventually.

day 3

The telephone rings and wakes up darwin. " hello" darwin half asleep says. "we found another body but you have to see this one. its a horrifying sight." "ill be right over." darwin says as he glances at the clock and it reads 3:00 am. Darwin arrives at the scene. Detictive burns is waiting there for him. They go to the body and see the most horrific sight. The numbers 10/2 are carved in the victims stomach. "Oh my god. How can we stop this guy" darwin screams. " get all the research you can on the numbers 10/2.." darwin says. "what does 10/2 mean? maybe a section in the bible?" burns says. he looks up 10/2 in the bible but there nothing. They search and search for days on the numbers 10/2 but they can't find anything.

Michael- let me ask you this what does 10/2 mean to you? audience i want you think really think hard on the numbers 10/2. You will probably not get it. But then again the audicece always right. Anyways back to the story get ready. this will be a good one

day 10

"We have had this case for ten days and we have found Nothing!" darwin screams. "where the f**k are you hiding you m**********r" darwin says. "i have to go pick up my kid from school" darwin says. "ok" burns replies. He arrives at his sons pre school all the cute kids playing smiling laughing. while darwin has gloomy look on his face along with all the other adults. He walks to sons classroom. "Daddy" his son Jordan says as runs and jumps into his dads arms. "ok ok now go finsih class" darwin says as he pats his son on the head. "now class before we go we should review the albahet and the numbers. How many numbers in the alphabet?" the teacher says. "26 " the class replies. " "Very good class. now i can give you extra if anyone can tell me what letter there name starts with and what number it is in the alphabet." the teacher says. Jordan raises his hand. "my name starts with a J and its the 10th number in the alphabet." "very good Jordan. 2 stars for you." the teacher says. "anyone else. Bobby." the teacher says. "My name is bobby. my name starts with a b and its the number 2 letter in the alphabet." Very goo-.". Darwin drops his coffee on the floor. " 10/2 JB. those are initials i must go i will be back." JB. he arrives at the office. JB thats what 10/2 is J the 10th letter in the alphabet and B the second letter in the alphabet." Darwin screams. "i want to know what JB is now". " I must go get burns he must help". dariwin says. Darwin arrives at burns house. And knocks on the door "burns its darwin open up" he yells. he knocks again no answer. darwin opens the door "hello" darwin screams . he walks through burns house. and trips over something. "god damit. clean up your f*****g me-me me" darwin stops he looks. He picks its up. "Small mens leather gloves, JB Johnathan Burns. of course everything fits." darwin says shocked. Darwin pulls out his gun. "burns you come out right now" he screams. he looks around the house and no one is there. He opens up burns bedroom. He almost drops his gun. There pictures of all the families he killed. He runs to the phone and fails the station. "It burns JB Johnthan burns i found the gloves in his house and there are pictures of the victims all of his room. find and send back up over here" darwin says he runs to his car and gets in. He is about to cry when all of a sudden. "Detective darwin. you figured it out. bravo to you. cheers my man." burn says laughing. "your done burns we got you" darwin says. "no no no. you see thats were your wrong you see the murders will never stop. you see i'm going to kill you now and then i am going to escape. you see because the bad guys never win never win right? but this time i will win. goodbye Darwin." Burns says smirking. Burns put his hand and the trigger. "please no" darwin says. "yowl die for this" darwin says scared. "3,2,1" bang. a gunshot off. Darwin looks up and behind burns is dead. theres a squad team outside. "we did it, we figured it out. Burns body gets burned. They tell the family they got them as cry. "i did it once again we- I did it" darwin says. as he drinks his cup coffee and walks back into his house. and closes the door. the sun goes down. And he can finally sleep



Ring ring ring. "hello?" darwin says. "hello?" he says. darwin hears laughter coming from the other end. and then a voice speaks "ah detective Darwin. I do admit that u do have some talent my friend. But you see it's not over the war has just begun. For it was not just burns who was the killer. He was part of a group of killers. And one of our killers die. The person that killed them dies as well as there family. You see my friend you will never find us. We will keep killing and getting bigger and bigger. And one day m friend one day. We will kill ever last one of u humans. For us we are not humans. We are as they call monsters. An these monsters can not be deafted. Have a good night detective. Make sure you hold your wife close. You never know when she might. Poof dissapere. But my friend you will die to. So all I'm saying is. Watch were you step u never know what u could step into. Goodbye detective or should I say goodnight.

The end

you see folks now you see why the town of whittery is the way it is. people are scared. because the people of whittery never know When they go to sleep. if they will ever be able to wake up again.

Written by Michael Friedman