Love

This is a poem about what it feels like to fall in love.

Love Love Love...
A what a joy it is to fall in love.
How great the feeling in your heart that makes you feel that way.
Every beat in your heart towards him beats each day.
The sun comes up and puts a smile on your face.
The clouds wont make you cry no matter what they throw.
In and out of your life they go.
His face makes you wake each morning.
His smile the best medicene to your pains.
The sound of his voice a song you want to hear again.
How did this happen?
How come I feel this way?
Will you come and take my breath away.
Will you love me each and every day.
Remember me when am away.
And miss me more and more till the next day?
Tell me you love me, cause baby you know I do.
I did the first time you told me, I did the first time you touched me.
I do now more than ever, I finish this poem with you forever.

Reviews

[Todd Rose]

Very nice work! I especially liked the last line. I thought it was the perfect way to bring the poem to an end. I was wondering if the use of periods instead of question marks in the following passage was intentional ? "Will you come and take my breath away. Will you love me each and every day. Remember me when am away."

[A.K.Bruhn]

wow this is pretty good poem
i wish i had that inthusiasum for love