"I'm Okay"

Insecure

 

Alone

Miserable

 

Obviously broken!

Killing for a true friend

Awaiting my day of peace

Yearning for you to love me too...

Reviews

[Megan]

the deception behind the words "I am okay."...so true sometimes, as if we're begging someone to look a little deeper.

the format is great too.

thank you for this!

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you so much:) God bless

[Soul Fire]

So sad, But I loved how relatable it is for many of us on a bad day.Great work

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank u very much:)
God Bless

[Soul Fire]

You're Welcome,God bless you too!

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This is so sad, yet wonderful.
100/100

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you
God Bless:)

[Heather]

I like this, it reminds me when I say "I'm fine" but I am not, I am anything but fine.. great job

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you
God Bless

[Derek Cummings]

I haven't read many poems in this format. I think it's smart and very creative. I surely can relate to it. Using mnemonic devices is a great idea. Just keep that in your mind and have it ready when times are dark.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless

[Speak in Silence]

I felt the same way a couple years ago. I felt like no one cared about me, that if I died no ones would care. But then I found out that the ones that truly cared about me were right in front of my eyes. I love this poem its a wonderful piece and the best part is that a lot of people can relate.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you! God bless

[Speak in Silence]

You're welcome :)

[Serenity Faith]

Very unique and very well done. I can't even begin to count how many times I've said that I am okay and the underlying voice was screaming the opposite. I think many will be able to relate to this ^_^

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you, and I agree. I say it alot when I mean one of the letters. Thanks for the review Emily:)
God Bless

[The Watcher]

Very clever! I never thought of it like that before.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:) and most don't, which is why its such a convincing lie;)
Thanks for reading, God Bless

[The Watcher]

Anytime! =)

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)

[The Watcher]

Lol, you're silly =P

[Lost in Wonderland]

I know:) But isn't it more fun that way?! haha:P

[The Watcher]

Of course lol. =)

[Lost in Wonderland]

haha:)