L.O.S.T. (acrostic)

This is a mix of acrostic/free form

Are you feeling lost

Like your about to drown?

And no help can be found

Don't know what to do

Need someone to save you

Here's something that may help you too:

 

Look to

Our everlasting Father to

Show you

The way

 

Reviews

[StayAnchored]

This was pure genious!!! I love it!

[TheJordBaker]

Brilliant. So much much truth in this and nicely put. I think this might just stay in my mind for a while.

[Rhianne Ney]

Good poem about God... It's true that when we are lost he will surely guide us to the right path (:

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless

[Rhianne Ney]

God bless too (:

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)

[The Scholar]

This is both cute and beautiful. It's always nice to have a much-needed little reminder of the love of God. Well-done!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless

[The Scholar]

Right back at ya :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)

[CH Archive]

Im not a fan of religous poetry , just because I think people use it way to much. But I do like this piece. Good work

[Lost in Wonderland]

Really? I actually don't see that much.. Haha guess I haven't been looking. But thank you for the revie Cole:)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Well done, Mickey. Brilliant:)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Well thank you B.S.W. :)
God Bless

[Irene]

ahhhhhh!!!!! love love love it!!!!

[Lost in Wonderland]

ahhhh!!! thank you thank you thank you :D

[MusicLover]

LOVE IT

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God Bless

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This is really strong and outstanding.
Great work!
100/100

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you!
God Bless

[AE]

Great! A poem that points to the one who will guide us to the light. :D

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you :D
God Bless