Beautiful Despair

I breath in Art

 

Heartbreak's my poetic equation

When life flows hard, I change its path

Using the pain as my inspiration

 

My motto is

Though life isn't always fair 

Choose to see beauty in despair

Author's Note

Poem for english based off Langston Hughes "Motto" structure. Not sure of I like the ending but this is just sticking to the structure, for this site I may add more...
God has the glory

Reviews

[That_Girl]

Great motto!

[Pax]

i like the ending actually.. its add to the depths of what you meant...
"beauty in despair"
~ its just like an abstract painting...

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)

[Drowning with Stars]

This is just like, wow. It's so deep. I love it darling :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you dear:)

[Tai Ryens]

I'm sure your teacher would have loved to lay her/his eyes on this; unlike mine whom has spoken with my parents about her . . . concerns.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you, and hopefully those conversations turned out in your favor..

[Kris]

Wow. This is beautifully written and it flows nicely. However, in your 3rd line, and I'm not sure if it's a typo or not, you wrote it's instead of its.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you very much:) and I will change that right now

[Kris]

You're welcome :) I look forward to more of your writing.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you (again) :)

[Lydia]

I quite like the ending actually.

[Lost in Wonderland]

thanks:) But you don't think its to..i dont know ..sudden of an ending?

[Lydia]

I mean the rest of the poem could be longer, yes, but I think the ending is good in itself.

[Lost in Wonderland]

alright thank you!
God bless