My New Year

I wrote this the New Year of 2011, it's based on my ex. Anyways, give opinion

The noise is too much

The lights are too bright

I can't take all of this

I just want to be with ou tonight

They run, they scream

They can't jsut be calm

I can't do this anymore

I want us to be palm-and-palm

Please save me from my hell,

I can't take this pain for long

I don't know I came here

I just need someone willing to sing along

I can't stand being alone

I can't stand being away from you

When I'm with you, my ehart just sings

A simple melody of La-Ti-Do