Fly, cry, will not die

Fly, cry, will not die

A Poem by ||TorN✨Pretty||

Can we fly?

She will cry.

Don't say goodbye.

Please don't die.

 

I want to know.

How does one, grow?

Where will she go?

And don't say no

 

I'm asking now and here!

Questions on how I swear

Answers nowhere near

It may take another year

 

But I wish to try still.

I'm saying what's true, I will. 

But I feel so ill

And this will over spill

© 2018 ||TorN✨Pretty||


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As I was reading, I felt like this was a third person omniscient narrator describing everything going through a newly divorced couple's heads. You syntax is simple, but powerful. Excellent write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

||TorN✨Pretty||

7 Years Ago

Thank you much!

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