A Rainy Day

Hi! In this poem I have described the really situation I went through.

It was raining cats and dogs
My school was flooded with water in and around
I didn't knew why I wished to be in school
Though there were no friends of mine around
There were less students present in the class
They too were taken home by their parents-- Alas!
Now only a few were left
Not knowing what to do next
Amongst them one was me
What to do? I never knew
So I wrote this poem
To be read by you!!
~Mihika

Author's Note

Hi people! I m a 10th grade student. M new at poem writing. Hope u will enjoy reading my poems.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A rainy day and writing a poem. Perfect place to write. I liked the story inside the poetry. Thank you Mihika for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mihika_d]

Thank you so much for your kind review!

[ShubhamT]

Oh, it's really simple poem. It reminds me of the incident when I was in such a situation. Well done, keep it up.

[Mihika_d]

Thank you for this wonderful review.

[Abhishek Izy]

Sweeett.. ha ha. Reminds me of lil rain drops dripping off the pine trees and huge sandy lil pools of water on the school ground under the grumbling dark afternoon cloud of pre-summer days. Those were the years, I bet i would miss forever.

Though here the rain seems less a delight and more a problem. Yet you bring it in your head and art. That's beautiful lil mind you have!

[Mihika_d]

Thank you for your wonderful reply. I had written this poem sitting in my school itself in the month of June when it had rained heavily and my school was completely flooded...

[Abhishek Izy]

That explains they dynamics of your write. Please keep up the good work

[Anshuman Aryav]

Wow.... Outstanding..
From the beginning to the end I have enjoyed this piece..
Keep writing..
Keep sharing..

[Mihika_d]

Thanks for ur appreciation 😊

[¿]

Huh! U mesmerised me gal!
Writing down how you felt bout writing the poem and letting us know that is a really cool thought I must say....keep up the spirit!👍

[Mihika_d]

Thanks Tahsin for inspiring words. I'll sursurely cm up with more beautiful poems😀

[¿]

You're heartedly welcome!😊