Unseen

Unseen

I've shed tears
and I've felt pain
I've seen beautiful views
but I've never seen the color of rain

I've been honest
and I've also sinned
I've done many things
but I've never seen the color of wind

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

These two stanzas seem to be mirror image of each other...and the defining moments of both have a story to tell...one with color of rain...and the other color of wind...I guess that would be smoke...

[Laminators Dubai]

beautiful and heartwarming...
thoughful and splendid...

thanks for sharing the unseen...

[MikeV]

Thank you for the review! And you are very welcome

[wordwarrior]

Oh so very deeply penned and most thought provoking. Too often we take life at face value(and that's good at times). But those deeper meanings can often be lost. We have to question life just to remember how [precious is can be.
Great writing Mike!

[MikeV]

Thank you! Your review gave me an idea for some new writing :)
Thanks again!