Too

This is a poem that just came to me tonight. Thought it was pretty good, and decided to post it.

Too fast, Too sudden, Too fierce

I couldn’t control myself

Too fun, Too romantic, Too engaging

Just like that it was gone

Too lost, Too young, Too soon

I was crying

Too sad, Too lonely, Too wrong

A bad decision, just one

Too fast, Too, sudden, Too fierce

 

 

Reviews

[Mike]

I am kind of slow and what not. But just a little fyi to everyone who reads this in the 2nd to last like I said, "A bed decision, just one" and what I meant to say was: "A BAD decision, just one" Yeah... so sorry about that guys.

[Annie]

I like it. Definately shows emotion. Great job!