Absence

Suffering

Not hearing your voice is worse than death,
Not seeing you for weeks is deprivation of breath.
Not being able to see your smile is more fierce than death sentence,
Not being able to be with you is an insult to my existence.
Away from the reach of my arm, you may smile,
But for me, trying to be happy is just....
Futile .

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Not being able to be with you is an insult to my existence.
How about this as a last line?
I loved this so much that I want to write more. Thank you so much for sharing this. When you write a poem, send me a request I don't want to miss any work of yours.

[Mikku]

Thank you so much..i'll surely add that line in my next poem..

[Najam Us Saher]

No, It would suit in this one. You are welcome.

[Najam Us Saher]

Because of the similar sentences and rhyme too, I felt that it will be much suited here, it's up to you :)

[Mikku]

How's this?

[Najam Us Saher]

Better. I like it :)