All right

Will everything be fine ever?

Your eyes sparkle with a light,
That says everything will be fine.
I don't know if it's survival or a fight,
Whether the defeat be yours or mine.

It's creeping up my soul,
Poisoning everything on its way.
Smouldering inside like charcoal,
Holding the fibres of life at bay.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Beautifully expressed the emotions, I loved the rhyme as well. Trust me, everything will be back in place it is just a matter of some time. Be patient and strong and don't lose hope.
I would suggest you to write 'All right' in the title.

[Mikku]

Thanks a lot

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.