Alone

I wrote this when i was really depressed and a lot of crap that was making me lose myself. So enjoty a look to what some of my past caused.

Alone is what I will be
I'm always alone never being able to see the light of life.
Never to see the light of day again.
I'll always be alone
For no one will care, no one will see how truly alone,
I am in the big world.
All I see is darkness where ever I go,
no happiness to brighten my day.
For you see I am always alone, cause no one is willing
to help me out of the darkness that will soon consume
my bestilled soul.
So alas, you now see that I am truly alone.
So forever may I be.



 

Author's Note

Any comments are fine, If you use a lot of profanity i will delete them its completely pointless to use it.

Reviews

[John Morris]

Just noticed is the title meant to be Alone rather than 'Alome'?

[John Morris]

A good piece of writing. I actually really like the font you did it in. Is their any reason for this or was it just becuase it looked good?

A good poem - alone.

[The Elder]

A nice piece! I hope this is not the true state of your life.
I've been there and it's not a fun place to be.
You are mistaken about one thing, there are those who
would be willing to help. There are always those willing to help.

[Invisible_kid]

this poem is great :]]]
i suggest using a bit more metaphors but otherwise this is a very good piece!!!