Liar

A 6-word story for a contest! :)

Pain doesn't lie like love does.

Author's Note

Jotted this down for a 6-word story contest! I was just curious to see if I could pull one off, so I hope you guys like it!

Reviews=motivation!

-Mila

Reviews

[TheLoversCheat]

I find this truth to actually remind me of a lot of things I see on the Telly or in books, where the character doesn't realize that the "lover" lied to use them in their own use. Simple and to the point and I like!

Good job and I wanna see other 6 letter stories that you come up with if you ever do :)

[Mila]

Thank you!!

[poetgurl]

so very true. love this, it's straight forward

[Unspoken poet]

so truthful, very well done.

[L.P.Greene]

Brilliant. As a fan of the six word story myself I enjoy reading other people's work. They're a true test of a writer, to see how much information they can convey, how much of a story they can tell with only those six words. they should be fully loaded like this. Wonderful. L.

[Rebecca Leigh]

this is heartbreaking, honest, and true. well done

[Riley Justine]

I love this! So true and so full of meaning in just six words!

[richieb]

Well said, reminds me of haiku. Would be hard to beat in a 6 word contest. Tainted love always brings pain.

[Tomoe Tellez]

Oh my gosh! This literally hit me in the face the moment I read it, I was like Ohhhh! And then Ouch! So very true. Excellent job!

[Malister Mikey]

In six words you produced a story, pain doesn't lie like love does. I know that statement to be very true from all the people who claim to love you only for it later to be revealed a lie. Though no matter what pain is just pain always true and needs no justification to be true. Great Work

[Mila]

Thank you!!

[Malister Mikey]

your welcome

[leen]

WOOOOOW, Its beautiful
keep it up :)

[Mila]

Thank you!!! :)

[leen]

Welcome :)