Liar

A 6-word story for a contest! :)

Pain doesn't lie like love does.

Author's Note

Jotted this down for a 6-word story contest! I was just curious to see if I could pull one off, so I hope you guys like it!

Reviews=motivation!

-Mila

Reviews

[TheLoversCheat]

I find this truth to actually remind me of a lot of things I see on the Telly or in books, where the character doesn't realize that the "lover" lied to use them in their own use. Simple and to the point and I like!

Good job and I wanna see other 6 letter stories that you come up with if you ever do :)

[Mila]

Thank you!!

[Salem]

awesome write ..............

[Mila]

Thank you!

[AaronFreitas]

Thats about as awesome as a 6 word story gets... truth :)

[Mila]

Thank you!! :)

[terry smith]

Very nice!! it is difficult to express something with so few words. bravo!

[Mila]

Thank you!!

[Ishika]

Hey Mila, loved it. Six words could be powerful enough ;) :D

[Mila]

Thank you!! :)

[Jennie Baron]

Wow! Love it, Mila. Only six words but the picture also says a lot. And they are six words that carry such profound truth.

[Mila]

Thank you so much!! :)

[Shivai]

Beautiful words! Its perfect!

[Mila]

Thank you!!!!

[Mr_M]

For me, the six worded story is the toughest and you have nailed it.

[Mila]

Thank you!! :)

[A. H. Pinley]

On point with as many as 6-words...

[Mila]

Haha to be honest, it's so hard to get a story out in six words. I was toying with so many ideas and they all sounded like gibberish (like I dropped acid at a music festival gibberish).

[A. H. Pinley]

I wouldn't be able to do it. I'm a man of many words and love detail. It's hard enough writing a 1500 word or less story, let alone 6-words. Nicely done!

[Mila]

Thank you!! And same here, it usually takes me a lot just to convey a point, so naturally this was a challenge.

[Taylor]

It's piercing and potent. Excellent.

[Mila]

Thank you!

[Sharon Kim]

This is great! Definitely works as a 6 word story. Powerful and truthful write!

[Mila]

Thank you!! This is my first shot at it, so I'm glad you enjoyed!