Life Mine

Life Mine

A Poem by Shaun Rudie
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A difficult time in my life; fortunate to view children playing. An offset of my withdrawal.

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conscious determination

mind of children

colorful volume expressive

a freight train of play,

burst peak energies,

puffing exertion and off-timed

growing shape

joy in irregularity

laughing teeth, pulling running,

stretching muscle, minds,

personalities

posturing, dancing wisps and

chunks

sweating the salt of

exuberance

© 2009 Shaun Rudie


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So cute! Isn't it great how things can just grab our attention and take out mind off of things? Great poem! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Shaun Rudie
Shaun Rudie

Tampa, FL



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5,000 words a day. Yeah, really. I challenged myself and met the challenge for 8 days straight. I write about it, and the craft of writing, here: http://writeku.com I have a novel here: www... more..