Drowning

I’m dying inside
And I can’t catch my breath
Under so much pressure
From the depths of deceit
That lay above me

The waters of hell
Block out all of the sunlight
And I’m at the bottom
Looking up to the top
Watching the waves rush

Feeling the pain strain
All of my weathered joints
Creaking and grinding gears
Like mental cognitive
Functions that I lack

The emotional support
That tethers me down like
Anchors, weights to ankles
Chains tight across my chest
Force the lack of breath

Bonded at the bottom
Holding what air I have
Losing my conscious mind
And accepting that death
As a substitute for life

Reviews

[falling_toxic_rain]

very dark. suffering the whole way through-pretty good on the expressing emotions parts.
nice write

[Griffin]

Thanks :D

[falling_toxic_rain]

You're welcome