him :]

also to my ex.

hi eyes, twinkle in the light,

like two crystals,

his lips, as sweet and soft as can be,

his kisses make me melt everytime,

as he pulls me in slowly, just for a kiss,

is simply amazing,

and what is even more amazing to have about him,

is that we love eachother dearly so,

everyday, it makes me smile just to hear his sweet voice saying,

"Baby, I love you".

He is the sweetest, most kind guy in the whole world,

and even better,

He's mine.

Reviews

[Gemini]

beautiful poem, seems to have a lot of emotion

[.Bunnie.]

I'm happy to hear that you have someone who's a great guy! You're very consistent in your writing throughout all of your poems that I have read thus far. I like your style; it's easy to relate to and flows smoothly. You get right to the point with just enough detail to entertain, but not too many words that it bogs the whole thing down. All in all, I give you an A+!!! (Or...10/10? How are we scoring, here?) :)

[Sseoni]

What a great poem! It was beautiful, emotional, and very passionate! I loved the flow of it and how you described the feeling! Fantastic poem! :D

[Darth]

good write i like how you dont let the chains of ryhme hold you down you just get your point across...i bet chris feels the same way