Trapped

Sometimes I feel like a tiny bird

Trapped in a tiny cage

Singing to the tune that others like

Never getting to fly freely

 

I sing and sing and sing

Never good enough

Just keep on singing

 

…

 

At night I dream about flying

Out of this cage

Into the sky

I dance between the clouds

Sing my own tune

Live my way

 

But I am not free

So I’ll keep on singing

Until the day I can sing no more.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Bravo..................

[Wolfwind]

Beautiful flow of ink. The imagery you present is soft and warm, sticking with the mind as the eyes read the words. The piece offers a mix of sorrow with hope and joy. Overall a wonderful poem to read. Nice Ink!

Aaron

[Rowen Cameron]

Wonderfully done. A feeling we can all relate to brought to life beautifully. Loved it!

[Destinyxi]

Nice write, I like the three last lines. Keep it up! :)