Disappointment

It seems much more harmless

From afar

In a subway station with

Muted colors and sounds

A sort of purgatory

Between the actual

Events we call life

 

No expectations down here

The flat expressions of

Two dimensional commuters waiting

Is a safer option

 

Dreams are not yet disfigured

by the light of day

 

                      I want to crawl into these untainted dreams

                      hope and youth wrapping around me

                     

                      I can breathe

 

                      

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Neon]

Waah! What a touchable poem! What a marvelous piece of the art!
This's "Proverbial" poem! This's Proverbial born writer's talent!

I love this poem, there's so much depth you poured into the words. What the great deep words you penned into the poetic form. Your really a great writer and Yeah, The hell yeah, You deserve to be on this cafe's site ... even though, You deserve more, Hey, Why don't you apply for publishing your own poetic books in the market??????? What you say???????

[Justaguy]

I like a poem that can get a point across, express an emotion in just a few lines. You do that. Nicely done!

[MissKayP]

Thanks. I'm glad it was successfully conveyed to you! You never know how other people are going to view your writing. I appreciate your review : )

[Justaguy]

My pleasure. Its always fun to read something good!