Go Away

Pain, Pain, go away
come and play no other day.

Author's Note

I get bullied...and this is what I wrote as I got slammed into the school stairwells. :(

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

A Wonderful Write. Short Sweet and expressive.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is sad :(
But a great poem!
I wish bullying would stop!!!!

[Captain]

Simple, relatable and sincere. Everyone knows this feeling.
'Captain

[Geraldine]

Awww, I know what you feel dear. This conveys the emotion you want to share in such limited words.

[SuicidePact.]

Awwwwwww. I feel so much pain in this tiny tiny body of writing, this is such powerful yet so so small. I feel the same pain as you do and it breaks my heart reading this xxo S.P

[Ashton Blake]

that is so sad.I hope it stops............I really don't like pain either.

[The Analog Kid]

Bullies will always exist. Too bad girls have gotten so combative...

[jennifer little]

cute and sweet short and lovely thanks for sharing this with me

[BluRaven aka Bootsy]

I like, its very creative. I try to tale things and twist them and some times i dont do that great of a job, but i like this

great start, now finish it