...Monte...

Poem to Monte.

Monte...

It's been two years,
you've been gone for far too long.
My heart's missing your smile,
missing your messy long blonde hair
the way you would be so annoying.
you annoyed me, who didn't you annoy?
Everyone calling you Satan
what hurt my heart the most was you were not just a boy, you were my very best friend,
you knew just about everything
more then anyone.
Your sweet voice..
oh how I miss it.

It's only been two years
it feels like a lifetime.
Will you always stand by me?
Will you always be with me?

Reviews

[MandaBear]

awww this was really sweet :)

[Kelly M.]

This is sweet... and sad. A very nice tribute to whoever you were writing this for. (:

[The Analog Kid]

Sweet tribute to your brother. Yes it has a childlike quality, but that's what makes it good.

[Lowesy]

gonna make me well up in a minute.....phew.....hang on......nah i'm good! :D very good, almost a childish element to this, the part where you say you were my very best friend, just sounds like something a kid would say :D