It's Precious

Dearly Beloved... and all that s**t yeah.

To me.. 

 -Your a brightest star

Lighting up the sky

- Your tough and strong

But it kills you inside.

It's hard when..

-Going to sleep

Not knowing if you ever gonna wake up again

- Seeing other people cry about you

when you feel fine. 

Listen To Me. 

For people + families everything goes wrong in a life time

It's a normal situtation to be in.. 

It's not nice, it kills everyone inside

But day after day.. you pretend to smile.. 

Keep everyone happy.

It doesn't work with me

I can't keep smiling 

Knowing the angels are gonna have you

THEY F*****G  CAN'T HAVE YOU. 

IT'S TO F*****G SOON. 

They can wait. 

At least another few years, Please?

Life isn't fair, It's so unexpected.. 

I swear to god, they can wait. 

Why the good people, She done no harm to no-one

Your all a bunch of wankers, Every single one of you god angel's

None of you exist. NOT ONE OF YOU. 

So they can wait, for the motherfucking moment.

- Miss'Lc

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Emotion is vented out really well here...

[Casper]

Wow... Very intense. You gave me goosebumps. It isn't fair that the good go sooner when the bad say longer. It sucks.
Very good poem and I loved the use of colors.

[stars are far]

nice
I love your way of using colors :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. A lot of anger and emotion in this poem. I like the question raised by this poem.
"I can't keep smiling
Knowing the angels are gonna have you
THEY F*****G CAN'T HAVE YOU.
IT'S TO F*****G SOON. "
No weakness in this excellent poem.
Coyote

[Penlady]

Very intense. Brought out as much feeling as was written into it. Exquisitely expressed.

[Thea]

Wow...That was powerful...So much emotions well crafted in here...