The Good, The Evil, And The Fair

Sleep, sleep deprived
Grab my hand, we will go for a ride
Through ocean fronts and fiery blazes
Broken glass and death gazes
Vibrant animals, smell of smoke
Don't eat the cookies or you'll choke

Take deep breaths, inhale the air
Smell the good, the evil and the fair

Dreamy sunrises fill the sky
In this world, you're able to fly
Sore high, melt into the sunset

Fore its only been four hours, but its not over yet

Author's Note

I just wrote this today during reading class actually. My teacher told us to write something about out "happy place" so I wrote a poem about my dreams. I hope everyone likes it :)

Reviews

[L0v3craft]

love this!
Its got everything I need in a poem to enjoy; dark, fantasy-like/slightly surreal, and its about the dream-world.
Thanks for sharing, luv ^3^

[Speak in Silence]

Thanks :)

[Panda11598]

OMIGOSH this flowed so well! I could picture it in my head and while I was reading it I actually thought about dreaming and then I read your author's note. Wow, you did an amazing job. keep up the good work!

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you :)

[That_Guy]

You had me at Sleep Deprived

[Speak in Silence]

lol Thanks :)

[Speak in Silence]

glad you liked it :)