Alice

My mind is filled with thoughts I cannot say

My thoughts are filled with actions I cannot display

I've always let you down with my filthy habits

I'm caught in a lie...

Call me Alice

Call me anything...anything but myself

Conscience a killer

"Find yourself, help yourself...bring yourself home"

My soul can do nothing but run...nothing but hide

Maybe I'm done, maybe I'm gone

Disapate into thin air like shadows to Rome...

But you scream whispers in my ear...

"Hold on.."

Author's Note

I'm so glad to be back! I haven't even attepted to write anything since November (and even the one I wrote and posted on here I thought was awful)...BUT I do have reasoning my good people. I've been going through more personal problems than I usually have had to deal with, but that's a story for another day. Plus I've had a bit of writer's block.

I was listening to the song: Intensity in ten cities by Chiodos when I thought of this idea. This poem is a snipet of some of the things I have been experencing. I really hope everyone enjoys! I hopefully will be writing more soon but I do have other activities I have to attend to now but I promise not to forget about you!

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

Belief and his arms reached out from the falls at Devils Court House,the spells of the rhododendron seemed a potion his lips parted just so ,can't he hear,I am gone why hang on,I am gone why pull me back under the waterfall ? My all consuming why ?

[Soul Fire]

Wow, so powerful!!!!!!!!!!

[Speak in Silence]

Thanks!

[Soul Fire]

You're welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

'I'm caught in a lie...
Call me Alice
Call me anything...anything but myself
Conscience a killer"
Nice flow of thoughts and I like the strong ending. Thank you for the excellent poem. I enjoyed this poem.
Coyote

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you for taking the time to read and review!

[Rhianne Ney]

Wah, great piece that you've got there (:

[Speak in Silence]

Thanks for taking the time to read and review!

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcomezzzz

[Myenigma]

greatly enjoy,

[Speak in Silence]

Glad you enjoyed!

[SmileBig :)]

I really like this. Well done!

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you!

[Hester Vane]

Great to have you back. And a great poem come back with! Full of emotion and a great use of language!

[Speak in Silence]

It's great to be back! Thank you for taking the time to read and review and I hope to read some of your work very soon.

[B-poet]

Sometimes that inner voice that's dying to heard can be louder the conscious thoughts within the screamer. You illustrated this well in this unique and creative poem. Great job. :)

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you much!

[Lina Grey]

Glad to have you back hun :) this poem is great. I love the concept and I can relate to the feeling. It's very dark and intense, and the rhyming is excellent. Brilliant write

[Speak in Silence]

Thanks a ton. I'm so glad to be back and I look forward to reading some of your latest work!

[Lina Grey]

You're welcome :)