Why

dark and hate :) gothic woohoo lol jk

Empty, hollow space

Is now what fills my chest

 

I gave you my heart

You took it and left

 

I stand there stunned

At what just happened

 

You ran with my heart

Still beating in your hand

 

Blood ran down your fingers

Dripping to the floor

 

A trail of tear-shaped drops

Lead to where you're hiding

 

I want to follow, but

I don't have the strength to

 

Why did you take it and run?

Why me?

 

What happened to the guy I once knew...

The guy that said "I love you"

 

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Lorraine]

The imagery is wonderful. A beating heart on a guy's palm, and there's a girl trying to give a chase--it's comical in a really dark way. I think it's insanely creative.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Elaine]

I love this, especially the imagery of the guy holding the heart in his hand and it dripping blood.

[Tina Kline]

I think this is a great poem about getting your heart broken
and the pain and confusion that follow.
I also really like the imagery you use.

Excellent poem!

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i love this its amazing i can relate

[Sarah]

i think it was amazing. i liked it alot!!! yay you!!!! lol :D:d:D:d

[Jeff Miller]

nice poem!

[Jackson Yang]

This poem speaks of actions that most people endure growing up. Falling for the wrong person and getting hurt in the end. I found the ending to be my favorite part. The ill fated words of "I love you." It was a good poem.

[Disturbed mind]

Hey...i think that is great...i already have asked this to myself...this is real?...anyway good poem...

[The Wave]

very nice.
the imagery is what makes this a really good write

the last stanza doesnt seem to fit with the rest of it though.

all in all,
good job.