Alone

I wrote this for my project on the Holocaust

Dark clouds rolling

Thunder cracks

Fear striking me

to my core.

 

Thoughts forgotten

Running from my life

Breathing erratic

heart is stopped.

 

Rain is pouring

Eyes, blinded by tears, search for you

Can't see where I'm going

or what I'm turning into.

 

Why aren't you here?

Saving me from this lie?

What did I do to make you leave,

and put me in this life?

 

Eyes are closing,

My breathing is slowing

I lie down and wait for this

to come to an end.

 

If it doesn't then I'll be in this

pain stricken fear forever

Thanks again for leaving me here..

alone.

Reviews

[Ashley.M.E]

This is really good, sad, but good.

[Wednesday]

This is actually pretty good. Don't listen to Troll's review. That person obviously doesn't know what they're talking about.

[X]

omg lol this poem had me with the first passage, it reminds me allitle about how i write. very nice with deep feelings that arent directly written, and and visual perfection. i love what you've done with this peice.

[Kayla_May]

aw thats depressing! im never leaving your sight lol