Feeling Free Under The Canopy

I wrote this for my Twin sister.

Feeling free, under the Canopy

I love the way, 

the clouds cover me-

My heart is free

high in that sky

maybe I'll catch a star tonight-

Perhaps I'll take one or maybe just two, 

not to many,

 but enough to give one to you,

I'm not one to speak up loud, 

but for you I'll take on the world

You've always been so kind,

and that's all I'll ever ask for.

-Misty Clayton (:

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Oh misty im feeling the freedom of real love....Brilliant buddy brilliant.....Never leave writing.....:Dhiman.......

[Mistylake]

It's very nice. I like way you made it rhyme so well. Nice work :)

[Amorette Duvannes]

Short and sweet - I loved the summer-esque imagery used. Keep up the good work!