Awake or not awake

Just some thoughts I had in my mind

Am I awake yet?

Can't you feel
Everything's supposed to be real
When you're awake

But I can't feel
When everything around me isn't real
...But I'm awake

Am I awake yet?

Can't you see me
When you open your eyes
Or am I just a dream
Why can't I realize
I'm awake

Maybe I'm dead
Trapped within my head
So I'm dead
Remembering all the things you said

Am I awake yet?
I'm already dead
Am I alive yet?
But you're in my head
Am I dead yet?

Life is my bed
Upon which my heart I lay
When will this dream
Ever go away?

Life is a dream
As I lay awake
Death is my life
When will I ever wake

Am I dead yet?
Am I alive yet?
Am I awake yet?

Hand amongst my head
Laying me down within life's bed
"Go back to sleep," you said
"You're already dead"

Author's Note

This is my very first poem that has been posted on this website, please leave reviews and for what a noob writer on here can do to make the writing better.

Reviews

[deeps]

Life is a dream
As I lay awake
Death is my life
When will I ever wake

AWESOME words here,
This is one amaing write
I like this alot.