Alchemy

a M.A.G.I.C. compilation

Racing on the chariot of secrets

And souls forsaken…

Those corners of the Universe’s limits

With no truth to be mistaken…

 

The Black Assassin holding his treasure

Through the boulevards of time…

Treasure with no price, treasure with no measure…

Molded gold from hearts of wine

 

That breath of gold…

Will it save me?

Truth to be told

I am my only enemy…

 

So it’s pointless to turn my heart to gold…

Just trading stone for metal…

So how can the coldest cold

Give birth to the most delicate petal

 

Of virtue?

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

So beautiful Ana, your words the photo ...stunning! :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear :)

[Anjan]

Your poems are always thoughtful.I thoroughly enjoy poems.They really move me.

[Ana B.]

I'm glad Anjan, thank you.

[Saddam]

Priceless thought.
Provoking and true.

That breath of gold…
Will it save me?
Truth to be told
I am my only enemy…

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much my dear.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like your thoughts and logic dear Ana.
"That breath of gold…
Will it save me?
Truth to be told
I am my only enemy…"
Above lines is true and direct words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you for stopping by and enjoying my work John.

[Coyote Poetry]

My pleasure Ana and you are welcome.

[ANTO]

The image is very..em...provocatively sensual - this alchemy is love I feel. It does take quite a lot of special ingredients to mix in the right ratios and to ferment and to process and transition for it to work out.

I'm reading the entire MAGIC box-set this morning - in reverse as it my quirky stooopid way of reading sometimes - especially newspapers. I had hoped when I got to 'A' it might have said ANTO ,lol
Ah well - perhaps someone else will immortalize me lol.
This is my favourite of the MAGIC series Ana. :))

[Ana B.]

it's true, it does take a special mix of ingredients...but without the right enchatment it doesn't work....because everything in this world is about the right vibes....ha ha, thank you my friend :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

That breath of gold…
Will it save me?
Truth to be told
I am my only enemy…

Very nice lines was good to read it....

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Skyfall :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend!

[Daisy]

awesome as always great job ana

[Ana B.]

Thank you Daisy:)

[R Smith]

and that's alchemy Ana, how to change words to works of art, you found the secret, you don't have to change your heart to gold, it s already there and the delicate petal is the wisdom of your writing :)

[Ana B.]

:) thank you very much my friend, your words are much more than any gold in the world!

[R Smith]

hm, now that would be an if only comment, I'd love to be that great but alas, not so, thank you though for saying that :)

[Ana B.]

:D well, gold is relative for everyone, so i'll take the praise anytime

[AaronFreitas]

I enjoyed this one Ana... so glad you're back! :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear! :)

[Emily]

Lovely wording!
Keep it up!

[Ana B.]

Thanks Emily!