Thanks

Thanks

A Poem by PoeticFury

If people only knew how much some cared

Yet this thing known as love and life has been thrown out the window.

It has committed going over the Bermuda triangle jumping out the plane and has landed in the middle of nowhere.

While they strive on the happiness that they think they own.


Reaping the benefits of the tears and cries of others who they left alone.

Diving into bed making mistakes for what they do and done.

Saying sorry when the ones that truly cared was there for them while the new ways of them that they now may have they can never dislike.

Due to the fact that they loved to much had no room toward them where they were able to hate.


As the wool over the eyes makes them blind.

Dressing up trying to be pretty.

Living the lives of their fantasy instead of taking there time.

Leaving people and others in pain.

Where there former lovers could love them who knew there name through their good and bad.

When they lost there thoughts people still respected them as they were not the same.

Where in site the value of what a person felt and can feel is way more than a nickname as they say a dime?


If one chooses to make all these choices that are hidden behind lip gloss, lipstick, fake hair, along with fake smiles where you store your deception in your head that you hide behind.

Why don't you focus on your inside take some of the mascara and make up your mind.

I am trying not to hurt not for me no longer but I am trying not to hurt for you.

Not due to the fact that people care like me with love for you.

Though due to all the pain that you put yourself through.

I am who I am now I do what I have to do.

I serve one master who I keep myself dear and true.

As in the words of an anti Christ.

We live all our lives trying to survive another day as now I see no longer in a yellow sun.


No longer hoping you the one, but hoping that your ways not your soul is killed by a gun.

As you sick back trying to survive another day that comes your way.

Everything takes two to survive.

Mainly all we need.

I thought you could be my second two, but you used me and I let you.

As there are two eyes to see.

Two lips to speak.

In addition to legs to stand.

Two arms to hold as I wanted to do with you to hear you breathe.

Two nostrils to breathe.

Love for me is now a game of dare and truth.

To me please don't speak.

Take your phones voice and put it on mute.

All that is spoken is written you made us this way.

Now all we have left now is to speak what is dear and true.

Thanks for the hard times.

F**k your feelings.

As long as you are not dead.

We can give a damn less what you feel.

For that matter what happens to you.  

© 2011 PoeticFury


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This write goes deep, it's as if you tapped into your raw emotions and just flowed it out onto a piece of paper. Many points I had to stop and think about the world, how flawed it is now. Amazing write, keep writing, the world is good for it...

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very raw, very real and very deep expression. Wonderful job

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on October 25, 2011
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PoeticFury
PoeticFury

New Orleans, LA



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Heaven has no fury like a writer with emotion. I love writing more than I love life. Why? Cause writing is my life, and without it I have no life. I enjoy music, and meeting new people. Also like most.. more..