Such beautiful and strong language to make your point. I like the poem. It was fun to read and the movement was very good. When if we are lucky and find the person who make us complete. No better day in a life. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote
Such beautiful and strong language to make your point. I like the poem. It was fun to read and the movement was very good. When if we are lucky and find the person who make us complete. No better day in a life. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote
You've covered the whole spectrum of life and love, painting such beautiful pictures of yin and yang. Alone they are different but equally stunning parts, but when brought together in a unifying bond, they are sublime. That's why 2 peas in a pot remind me of exactly that. In fact, I cannot think of a better comparison so BRAVO!
There are so many good lines here, but I absolutely adore:"You and I are love in motion and eternity in the now" - One of a kind sir! Why wait for eternity, when we can have it now and for ever.
I also love the line, "WE are Oxygen, you and I,
finding stability in our trinity." - such a smart reference to a trinity (H2O = 3 people - hehe)
My computer is crashed and I won't be up and running for a couple months or more. I will do my best to visit and review once in a while.
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