River

Your lower lip quivers. 
Your tongue laps the shore and splashes.
The sun sinks into you.
I slip into you, into the rippling
spotlight. I sip you like white wine. 
I let you get to my head,
my flesh, my face

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[SquinklaPsyOps]

You capture and draw out multiple emotions which is very impressive.

The emotion and message is very clear.

The simplicity of your words is right for this topic.

Very well written and true.