shoot me now

this is how i felt when i found out my girlfriend was going to dump me. twas a cold and dark time.....

I'm being ripped apart,
I can no longer think,
All I feel is pain,
As i reach the brink,
My eyes open wide,
I'm freaking terrified,
Choking as i cry,
Wish that i could die,
What the hell happened here?
Its so confusing,
Things I can't live without,
I end up losing,
Close to brain-dead,
I'm messed up in the head,
What is wrong with me,
Its something i can't see,
No matter what i do,
Things never change,
I must be mental now,
I feel deranged,
Some one shoot me in the head,
Cause what I've heard and what I've read,
Things get better when your dead,
So shoot me now, right in the head.

Author's Note

hope you like it. =D

Reviews

[Pixie Meat]

"What the hell happened here?"
That's always the real question, isn't it?
I really liked the poem. It's genuine. We need more guiniune writing in this world.

[John A Common]

Awesome poem,very well written. I have been through it and yeah, it does make you want to shoot yourself in the head. Good job.