waking up

I've always been told that the moment
you wake up is the most important
part of the day,
I wholly disagree, the most
important part of my day is when
I wrap myself around a pen
like a python 
and bleed black ink,
so each letter and scribble is an endless
onyx abyss of meaning that
I drown in again and again.

Reviews

[Lexi Richard]

Really interesting imagery, especially
"so each letter and scribble is an endless
onyx abyss of meaning that
I drown in again and again."
I love your word choices.

[the penumbra]

Thank you, I appreciate your comment. That's my favorite part of the poem.

[Jackie]

Wow never thought of it this way yet I'd would most definitely have to agree. And will also have to agree with lexi on your choice of words. Lovely read

[the penumbra]

Thank you! You are too kind.