If they knew...

As I took my last breath

I wondered what they'd say

If they knew 

I was going away

Never coming back

Going away...

~Moniba.

Reviews

[The dark story]

amazing how few words can express so much and can be so thought provoking...unfolding the truth of one part of our life...nice job!!

[Dr. Wood ?]

This is it in a nutshell....We all have to leave and the majority of us worry about those we leave behind

[Muhammad Qasim]

true!! the lines are poetic and chaotic!! nice work : )

[Moniba]

jazakallah

[Muhammad Qasim]

SubhanAllah!!
yaar request hai ke when u write Allah in these words use capital "A"

[Moniba]

okae. btw, JazakAllah ka jawab Barakillah hota hae if you're saying it to a girl and BarakAllah if to a guy.

[Muhammad Qasim]

awww !! thanks for telling me that...always open to corrections :D