I Close my eyes...

love, discovering your hidden entrapments but still choosing to let them believe your a fool. In the end 'i wish to be your fool'

"I know who you are,

though you are the one who destroyed everything,

the one whose actions broke the hearts that left many in bitterness around me,

i can't do anything but watch

because you, in light of all of your previous crimes,

Committed a crime far greater,

you stole my heart."

Author's Note

Not a true poem in a sense, i still want to work on it to make it better. But, here, have it.

because you are also in light of all of your previous crimes
the one who committed the greatest crime of all,

hmm which sounds better?

Reviews

[Angel]

It is a true poem if that's how you wish to write it. I personally like the one you already have better just because of the wording and how it fits in better than the other. I do like this though it's very relatable. But try not to doubt yourself, believe in your work for it's telling us, you.