Droop

When you are lost, when your heart is empty, and the only place left is ....

Her eyes hold nothing

Her hands are drooping

Left in her right pocket

are plans to deposit

Her last playlot, her body

is weak, she falls to 

her knee's. Help. Ambulance.

Bright red lights, sirens

Stop the names, stop 

the decade, stop the feints

Stop me from me. 

Stop.

Tell me, everything is as 

it seems. No more dreams

No more needs, no more

no more. 

Turn to dust. 

May the wind take you

To were you where meant to be.

Author's Note

Feedback please! Should I do this in past tense rather then present? Or do you feel it is better as present tense? Also stanzas three and four should they be switched?

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Has the sound of a suicidal emergency. Someone has apparently called 911, for the ambulance is arriving, but the impression is that the speaker wishes the EMT's had not come. Depression is one hellish disease.